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Saturday, August 19, 2006
Sabbatical: Stencilled Fulfillment
Emptied of self
Breams full new capacity
Pouring out love’s
Invisible wine

Opened up hands
Unmeasurable giving
Breaking life’s bread
So lovers can dine

Bread and New Wine
Stenciled fulfillment
Unleashing moment
Eternity’s Time.

It's over. Sabbatical done. This is one I wrote on the porch one evening this summer. As I searched for a title, it occurred to me that this idea of Stencilled Fulfillment is the essence of what sabbatical is to eternity.


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posted by John David Walt | at 8/19/2006 09:20:00 AM

 

8 Comments:

Anonymous Matt Purmort said...

Good poem JD except in your case it should be "Invisible Grape Juice." :)

9:46 AM EDT  
Blogger DGH said...

Man, the photo is even better than the poem this time! love it. Thank you!

10:03 AM EDT  
Blogger JohnDeere said...

come on matt--- we believe in grapetransubstantiation. and thanks dg.

12:39 PM EDT  
Blogger b.h. swan said...

I love how each segment ends with ine or ime. Great rhyming JD. And very good use of words. I love it.

I have attempted poetry of romanticism. Coming soon. JD. Keep poeting.

9:32 PM EDT  
Blogger JohnDeere said...

thanks b.h.-- you rock jd

4:46 PM EDT  
Blogger corey said...

It's great to read you and B.H converse on poetry. Keep learning your craft.
Thanks for allowing the rest of us to partake.

hope all is well in the Shire!

1:23 AM EDT  
Blogger ray said...

the picture is great JD...thanks for sharing

3:28 PM EDT  
Blogger k miller said...

JD,

I think "Sabbatical: Stencilled Fulfillment" is one of your best! Perhaps that's because I'm in a "waiting" place right now.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and experiences!

Blessings,
k miller

2:28 PM EDT  

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