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Sunday, June 04, 2006
Pentecost Fire breathed heaven at the speed of Light Declaring day, destroying night Dark struck back with apple’s snake bite Now swords of fire to guard Eden’s delight Fire breathed Heaven cut covenant right While Abram dreamed of Egypt’s blight As unconsumed a bush burned bright Became Firey guide faith’s pillar of sight Fire breathed Heaven shew Gideon’s might Clay pots trumpeting, torch wielding fright Fire on mountain won Elijah’s fight Chariot aflame gave Heavenly flight Fire breathed Heaven signed inbreaking Light King chasing star pursued like a kite In swaddling clothes his mother wrapped tight Blazing Son of God Satan’s kryptonite Fire breathed Heaven on torches of spite Dark’s final blow, death’s cruciform smite Candle snuffed out in sepulcher’s plight Light of World swallowed by tomb’s appetite Fire breathed Heaven said Angel in white Jesus is Risen! A new record height High Court decision reverses snake’s bite History’s future demands a re-write Fire breathed Heaven Disciples contrite Amid falling flames of power and might Unlearned men suddenly erudite Religious scholars forever uptight John David Walt, Jr. Pentecost 2004 Labels: poetry posted by John David Walt | at 6/04/2006 09:21:00 AM
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awesome! Thank you!....BTW.... is it just me? Have you started taking poetry classes...or has God just started to fill your head with creativity? I am not sad at all they are blessing my socks off, but wow...there are thee majory parts of your blog life, family, poetry, and American Idol, heh....
please know I am giving you a hard time...I love the blog you! take care and know that yall are always in our prayers! Thank you for your gift this Sunda!
This has some of the same cadence and wordplay as a book about baptism (different subject), by walter wangerin.
I ask again, when are you going to gather all of these in a book...perhaps accompanied by photographs....aren't you going on sabbatical....
JD Walt....the poetical Nouwen for emerging generations.....
thanks jp-- i am presently trying to collect 40 of my poems into a collection called "40" in celebration of my 40th year of life. so thanks for encouraging me jonathan-- very much. pray for this project. i'm excited about it. i don't anticipate actually getting it published--- but it will be a worthy act of work nonetheless. it is its own end.
thats poetry friend.
I still say you should attempt to get it published with someone, if not, then just skip them and pay some to get it self published, I'd buy a copy from you...I'm sure others would too...I think you'd be surprised at how many folks would want what you write...humbleness aside, JD, you got a good vibe with this poetry.
I went through Iuniverse and have been overwhelmed/humbled at how people have been touched by my book...it's ranked 2.288 millionth on amazon, so it's not a best seller obviously, but the several hundred people who have bought it have been touched...that's what is great about writing!
My point, my friend, is that your poetry can reach people, it obviously already has touched us farmstrongers.
Go for it! "40" Nice title/concept...like it!
i'm with jp on the publishing thing. i know a graphic designer that might be willing to help out. ;)
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